Fangirlism on ... Kuroshitsuji!
I admit that I still rare anime look ... I have no time to watch series with subtitles, because I can not work (usually run at my films and I'm drawing or programming by the way). But some time ago I came across the manga "Black Butler" and I really like the, I've started a few days, the corresponding series "Kuroshitsuji" look.
Yes, and now I am already addicted to typical Fangirlism! I love Sebastian udn the other characters. The story has something for themselves as they comes along pretty exciting and mysterious and raises many questions waiting to be answered. Currently have I just know half of the 1st Season achieved, but I think this weekend I will see the series end. My plans to write, I have already given up anyway, as we do on Saturday at the Renaissance Faire in Rumpenheim. I was so far from everything on a MA-market ... I am looking forward to it, but at the same time I am annoyed that I still do not get to write ...
No matter ... I simply do not begrudge the break, watch some anime (maybe there is then still "FMA Brotherhood" in an act of violence of 2-3 days) and craft in the new design for "Like a Dream" ; around ... for the Page I have a very special layout that is planned;) is
Wednesday, August 11, 2010
Friday, August 6, 2010
Congestive Heart Failure Stages
beta reader and feedback
Meanwhile, "Kim" for several weeks prior to the beta readers, and there were quite a bit of feedback and interesting comments. I find it amazing how different a story is perceived. For me it is really the first time I got real beta reader and it is an extraordinary experience. In particular, the different opinions on some passages are downright fascinating.
For example, when it comes to Annatar:
He is a magician in a medieval world and is "called" in today's Wiesbaden. He skipped over in seconds centuries of human history (even if he comes from a fantasy world, the basics are still medieval).
beta reader 1 says Annatar has too much fear of cars and the modern stuff, after all, he is with magic and magicians can create almost anything you can imagine. He should be open to the world.
Beta Reader 2 believes that his reactions are too lax ... he should respond to more extreme all that flows to it (so รก la "Catwoman").
Maybe I'm the problem really found the perfect balance, or so it seems, p
Otherwise today was the first complete assessment of the novel ... a colleague from the ink circle made within 2 weeks of reading the entire manual ... and I think it's great how much time they spent and how history has affected them. It has given me a lot of notes and comments (and still plans to oO make a detailed chapter critique;). In any case, great, what is her everything, and noticed how the book got a whole. I am grad that all in all been quite well received. sometimes had my doubts if I do not write too confusing and boring;)
Meanwhile, "Kim" for several weeks prior to the beta readers, and there were quite a bit of feedback and interesting comments. I find it amazing how different a story is perceived. For me it is really the first time I got real beta reader and it is an extraordinary experience. In particular, the different opinions on some passages are downright fascinating.
For example, when it comes to Annatar:
He is a magician in a medieval world and is "called" in today's Wiesbaden. He skipped over in seconds centuries of human history (even if he comes from a fantasy world, the basics are still medieval).
beta reader 1 says Annatar has too much fear of cars and the modern stuff, after all, he is with magic and magicians can create almost anything you can imagine. He should be open to the world.
Beta Reader 2 believes that his reactions are too lax ... he should respond to more extreme all that flows to it (so รก la "Catwoman").
Maybe I'm the problem really found the perfect balance, or so it seems, p
Otherwise today was the first complete assessment of the novel ... a colleague from the ink circle made within 2 weeks of reading the entire manual ... and I think it's great how much time they spent and how history has affected them. It has given me a lot of notes and comments (and still plans to oO make a detailed chapter critique;). In any case, great, what is her everything, and noticed how the book got a whole. I am grad that all in all been quite well received. sometimes had my doubts if I do not write too confusing and boring;)
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